The Coffee Fund: Writing an Influential Email

Author
Claire McCarty, University of Wisconsin-River Falls
Region
North America
Topic
Human Resources & Organizational Behavior
Operations
Strategy & General Management
Marketing & Sales
Length
3 pages
Keywords
organizational influence
persuasion
business communication
Sales
marketing
Student Price
$4.00
Target Audience
Undergraduate Students

Sasha oversaw the Coffee Fund for the College of Business where she worked as an administrative assistant. Coffee drinkers were asked to contribute. Over the years to maintain this fund, Sasha relied on repeated emails soliciting donations. As coffee supplies were seriously low, Sasha sent an email the previous week: “The Coffee Fund has contacted me. They have told me they are low on funds for purchasing more coffee, creamer, etc. If you would like to contribute, that would be wonderful.” Hardly any of the coffee drinkers had chosen to contribute. After doing a little research into persuasion, Sasha began to compose another email. What should it say?

Learning Outcomes

In analyzing this critical incident, students should be able to:

1. Summarize principles of organizational influence.

2. Apply French & Raven (1959) bases of power.

3. Evaluate an email using general influence tactics.

4. Evaluate an email using Cialdini’s (1984, 2021) principles of persuasion

5. Create, using Cialdini’s (2021) seven principles of persuasion, more effective messaging.

6. Create, using the AIDA model, a more persuasive email.